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| The words in pink are the changes we made. |
Monday 25 March 2013
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring!
Even though it still looks like winter here, we are excited to say goodbye to winter and hello to spring! We worked together to write a poem. After we wrote the poem, we re-read it and decided to make some changes. We tried to add some juicy words so that our readers could get a picture in their minds.
When we were finished, we were so proud that we decided to make our poem into a movie. Enjoy!
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I LOVE your poem! I shared it with all my friends on Facebook. Excellent work.
Dear Room 8,
Your poem is so good! It reminds me that there are good things about all of our seasons. I love playing in the snow with my dog, Emma. I also love the grass and flowers in the spring. Did you know that there are places in the world where they do not have 4 different seasons like us?
I just heard your poem and it's really good! Thank you for sharing that with us.
Cynthia (Abby's mom)
Dear Elisha,
Thanks for the beautiful comment. Thanks for sharing our video - Love Room 8
Dear Mrs. Couch,
We love your comment, it's so beautiful we almost cried.
Love Room 8
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