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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Monday, 25 March 2013
Goodbye Winter, Hello Spring!
Even though it still looks like winter here, we are excited to say goodbye to winter and hello to spring! We worked together to write a poem. After we wrote the poem, we re-read it and decided to make some changes. We tried to add some juicy words so that our readers could get a picture in their minds.
When we were finished, we were so proud that we decided to make our poem into a movie. Enjoy!
Tuesday, 30 October 2012
3 Star Drawings
Today we talked about making really great drawings. We looked at four different drawings and talked about what we noticed about each of them. Then we gave each of the drawings 0-3 stars based on what we noticed.
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0 Stars = Scribbles
Nothing
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1Star = We can tell what it is
1 Colour
Some scribbles
Not many details
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2 Stars = We can tell what it is
No scribbles
More details
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3 Stars = Lots of details
Many colours
Background
Shows what you were writing about
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After we were done, we all practiced making 3 star drawings!
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